My Holiday
In the holiday my family and I went to wave pools in Australia. My brother and I were excited to go. First my brother, my dad and I went on a big slide. My dad likes to splash water on my brother and me. A timer or a lifeguard would tell us if the next wave would be coming. The waves are big, as tall as a big apple tree. Some people would swim under the water so that they wouldn't get hit by the big wave. Next we ate some potato chips and a sandwich. When we finished eating we had to wait for our family to finish. After that we went off to play in the water again. It was so awesome. Finally we went and got change in the change room. Then me and my brother said "bye bye" to the people that work there. We felt exhausted and tired swimming at the pool's. THE END
Hi Vivienne,
ReplyDeleteIt was interesting reading about your holiday in Australia. That wave pool sounds amazing with such huge waves. I wonder if you might be able to find a picture on the internet of the place you went to. Google the name of it to check. If you find a picture you could copy it onto your blog but make sure you copy the link of the URL where you got the picture from. Keep up the good work.
Great story writing about your holiday Vivienne. It sounds like you had so much in Australia. The big waves sound really scary and I would've been exhausted swimming all day too. Keep up the great writing.
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Hi Miss Lavakula,
ReplyDeleteThanks for writing me a comment.I was really exhausted when I came out of the pool.I hope you enjoy working with your class.
from Vivienne